A Smiling Wife (Poem)
This is my "Carnival of family life Submission" It is a weekly writing contest hosted by kailani at "An Island Review".. Come spin a pen (or click clack a keyboard), join us and share your mind.
The carnival is up over at "Mom on Wheels"
A Smiling Wife
I have a friend with one great need.
He longs to see his woman smile.
A gentle word, a soft embrace.
Too many wounds, resentments, stolen away.
Of all the loss it is poignant to know
the sweetest loss, her smile.
The power of this,
tenderness within .
Safety, a peaceful place to rest awhile.
Empty are the pursuits to gain,
all is loss whether self righteous or profane.
Emptiness is all that remains.
The carnival is up over at "Mom on Wheels"
A Smiling Wife
I have a friend with one great need.
He longs to see his woman smile.
A gentle word, a soft embrace.
Too many wounds, resentments, stolen away.
Of all the loss it is poignant to know
the sweetest loss, her smile.
The power of this,
tenderness within .
Safety, a peaceful place to rest awhile.
Empty are the pursuits to gain,
all is loss whether self righteous or profane.
Emptiness is all that remains.
What power we hold,
yet untold.
Lost in a flicker of carelessness.
Warm eyes, a simple grin.
It is what is most important to men.
We may not see this until a tragic end.
So in your strength
smile at him.
Offer your eyes of warmth
a safe place to enter in.
Gain all that he needs in you.
You will have a forever friend.
yet untold.
Lost in a flicker of carelessness.
Warm eyes, a simple grin.
It is what is most important to men.
We may not see this until a tragic end.
So in your strength
smile at him.
Offer your eyes of warmth
a safe place to enter in.
Gain all that he needs in you.
You will have a forever friend.
5 comments:
Very pretty poem!
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Beautiful my friend.
What a wonderful poem! Ironically my husband just told me this morning how much he loves to see me smile. :) I hope the jaw/tooth is getting better! So sorry for that. Thanks for dropping by my corner. ;)
Hugs,
Holly
What a beautiful and thoughtful poem that was! Thank you for visiting my blog...we probably ARE neighbors! :)
I'm visiting by way of the carnival and I so loved your poem. Very thoughtful!
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